The piece provides some interesting surprises and creativity. The metaphoric title, itself, makes me try to imagine two people struggling for balance, and, of course, that is often what it is like to be in a relationship. And I like very much the beautiful things that become woven into the rope.
Ever since I started writing poetry I’ve been looking for new metaphors to express love.
I pictured two jump ropes tied together and the handles snapping due to constant striking and overuse. Very striking imagery!
I often wish I could see my writing through your eyes!
Very well written !
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Thank you. I’m not here very often, but I’ll pay a visit…
Thank you very much !
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